.Joker.
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
410 IQ
#1
I tried to make something simple sound amazing I dunno if I succeeded or not...
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Regression
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2007
611 IQ
#2
Can't be bothered giving much crit.

Pre-chorus needs some revising.

Some of this sounds suspiciously like face down, notably the chorus, and that general progression when it's used in the verse aswell. Good chorus though.

110-111 sounds like it's leading onto something good, but the rest of the solo doesn't meet those expectations. Spend a bit more time on that part, it could make a huge difference to the overall song.

The interlude isn't bad, I like the build up.

Don't like the harmonising in the outro. Seems a bit cliche.
Last edited by Regression at Sep 9, 2008,
Valo
UG's Kanye West.
Join date: May 2004
293 IQ
#3
I thought this was kickass, Im a sucker for strings and such; it was very pleasant to listen too, kinda Metalcore-ish; I got the feeling. Solid song!
.Joker.
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
410 IQ
#4
Thanks for the crits
The general progression was actually from "the kids aren't alright" and the prechorus was a little experimental thing I was trying I wasn't expecting much from it haha
and thanks Valo