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ok this is my very first song. Usually i have other people write stuff for me, but they didnt seem good enough. please fix, comment, ect anything. I'll c4c


verse 1:
Its weird that you've been gone for awhile,
but i can still feel you, smell you on,
my skin
And i hope it never goes away

Chorus:
I wish you come back
but i know you wont,
and know this, we'll see each other again soon.
but till then i'll count the day.

verse 2:
I wish you had never left
and the loneliness scares me
like a child in the dark.
I just hope the light comes on soon.

Bridge:
This home feels empty without you
and nothing looks the same.
please come home
come home (x3)

Chorus Out
Quote by Lil Macker
Please tell me he's not from The Pit. That place changes people...

*shudders*
Last edited by guitarpwn3 at Sep 8, 2008,