#1
this one is meant to be pretty straightforward. a good 'ol fashioned suicidal rock song if you will

Hungover and lonely
And nowhere to go
Some water beside me
I hope I don't choke
I shoulda stopped drinkin'
A long time ago
Hungover and lonely
With nothin' to show

I'll never beat this disease
It's going to eventually kill me
I'll never beat this disease
It's going to eventually kill me

Suicide Tuesday
Nothin' seems fun
Some water inside me
It might be too much
I shoulda stopped drinkin'
Enough is enough
Suicide Tuesday
Just might get the gun

I'll never beat this disease
It's going to eventually kill me
I'll never beat this disease
It's going to eventually kill me

Her face
Her fresh color tanned by the sun
My rehab has just now begun
Myspace... never fails she's
A *****
Fried by the bulbs right next door
Wanting a perfect test score
Meeting me would be such a bore

Hopeless and lazy
With nowhere to go
Some water beside me
I hope that I choke
I shoulda stopped drinkin'
To restrict the flow
Of poison inside me
Allow me to go

I couldn't beat this disease
It finally overwhelmed me
I couldn't beat this disease
It finally overwhelmed me
Last edited by TheTripleThreat at Sep 14, 2008,
#2
nice dude, i like how u changed the last chorus adds a good touch to the feel(which u nailed!!!!!)
tho i'm curious, is the water a metaphor for alcohol?