CraZyB0y
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Join date: Nov 2007
454 IQ
#1
Well... I'm a noob pretty much. Lately I been thinking I'm going nowhere with my music, I feel like I suck and I have no band or even any people to just have a leisurely jam with.

So, then I had a sudden burst of creativity and wrote the following. I apologize in advance for the extreme shortness. I'm using the demo version of GP5 so I could only squeeze in 24 measures anyway.

Also, I can't quite play the part I have labeled as "Chorus" but everything else is obviously no problem. And I apologize for the terrible bass lines...

C4C I guess... Just let me know if I totally suck or not.

EDIT: Added a GP4 version tab into the .zip file.
Attachments:
My burst of creativity.zip
Last edited by CraZyB0y at Sep 10, 2008,
NorfIrIon
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#2
Sounds stereotypically Asian.
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CraZyB0y
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#3
Ummm... What can I say to that? rofl. Thanks....?.... I'm not asian though, so maybe that's bad.
NorfIrIon
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#4
Quote by CraZyB0y
Ummm... What can I say to that? rofl. Thanks....?.... I'm not asian though, so maybe that's bad.


Wasn't really a compliment. Wasn't really a critique or insult. Just an observation.
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Jake the Peg
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Join date: May 2008
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#5
If You Put It Into Gp4 By Changing The File Extention When You Save, Ill Give It A Crittin
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CraZyB0y
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#7
Quote by HeavyMetaldude
I agree. I have Gp5 though so it should work. Do you have 5.2 or something?


Beats me... I just went to the site and downloaded the 15 day free trial so I could try before I possibly buy.

And I'll submit a GP4 version here in just a few minutes.
Jake the Peg
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Join date: May 2008
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#8
the chords to the lead dont sound right.
i think the first chord should be a 7 on the lowest string, not a 5...
but its kind of interesting.
if your having trouble coming up with good riffs just keep playing, make stuff up like that, and very occasionally, one'll turn up and it will sound great.
just keep writing stuff down though.
'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein