dontbestupid47
geRitseder esUr
Join date: Jul 2006
351 IQ
#1
i posted this song up a couple weeks ago without the drums, but now I added them and expanded a lot.

me and my friend plan on recording this soon. hopefully we finish it real soon. its not going to be the greatest but a recordings better than none.

crit 4 crit. thanks!
Attachments:
the tragedy of plastic hand grenades.zip
Police were called to a daycare where a three-year-old was resisting a rest.
classical_gas
Hairyus Arseus Maximus
Join date: Sep 2005
522 IQ
#2
well it's not very original, but it sounds amazing! Nice harmonizing, great solos, even the vocal lines are good. Maybe just add the bass? And I didn't particularly like the piano outro,I don't know, for me it doesn't fit the rest. Great stuff though 9/10

crit mine if you want: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=952438
[oh and I suggest attaching the midi file, so that people without gp5 can here it. Just go to File=>Export=>MIDI]