#1
well i just started writing song and i need help with this song if it helps some of my favorite are Three Days Grace,Shinedown,Alter Bridge/Creed Well here we go


Intro
Where did I go Wrong
And when did you grow so cold
need help here!!!!1!!!!!!

Chorus
Because im not always lying
and im not always hiding
and im not always flying


thats all i got
#3
Intro
Where did I go Wrong
(And) leave it out when did you grow so cold
never saw this coming,
or should I have know all along?


Chorus
Because im not always lying
and im not always hiding
and im not always flying
Your chorus sucks. Like Sum 41 lol. too many "and's" it doesn't flow. "Flying"? I mean c'mon.


Chorus
Your not afraid to lie,
or betray a friend,
time to talk,
about this message you send.

I'm not one to stand around,
or to give up my ground,
cause I can fight too,
with more hate than you.


So yah. Maybe its better I dunno.
Hit me up sometime tell me what you think