#2
some little mistakes threw me off and the intro was kinda crappy.
Just remember, at the end of the game, the king and the pawn go in the same box
#3
The Intro was...interesting. so was 1:08. And after that. And, Either you need new effects or a new recording device to get better results...
Gear -

-Dean MLX
-Standard P-Bass
-Behringer Ultrabass BX300 (It can't wait to crap out on me)

#4
Intro sucked, effects sucked.

You seemed to be playing the right notes(though very choppily) throughout the song.
Gear
Fender Thinline Telecaster Deluxe

1983 Aria Pro II XX Deluxe Flying V

2007 S101 EGU34

1963 Kay Vanguard

1964 Kay Vanguard

AXL Badwater SRO

Hondo Strat

1974 Acoustic(brand) 134 4x10 combo

Epiphone Valve Jr.