some little mistakes threw me off and the intro was kinda crappy.
Just remember, at the end of the game, the king and the pawn go in the same box
The Intro was...interesting. so was 1:08. And after that. And, Either you need new effects or a new recording device to get better results...
Gear -

-Dean MLX
-Standard P-Bass
-Behringer Ultrabass BX300 (It can't wait to crap out on me)

Intro sucked, effects sucked.

You seemed to be playing the right notes(though very choppily) throughout the song.
Fender Thinline Telecaster Deluxe

1983 Aria Pro II XX Deluxe Flying V

2007 S101 EGU34

1963 Kay Vanguard

1964 Kay Vanguard

AXL Badwater SRO

Hondo Strat

1974 Acoustic(brand) 134 4x10 combo

Epiphone Valve Jr.