i really thought it was good. you are a good singer. my only criticism is that bass part (i'm assuming its a bass) is way too loud and covering up your best attribute which is your voice
Sounds pretty cool
I love my...

Parker Nitefly Mojo - custom
Schecter 006 Hellraiser
Ibanez S470QS

Mesa / Boogie F-50
Vox AD50VT

Seagull Artist Studio cutaway I-beam

Ibanez ATK700
Ibanez Soundwave 35