#1
Living life in the light will never get you far,
at least thats what i used to know,
living life in the darkness will always be more fun,
i want to move into the light but that will never show

is it all
completely worthless
are we all
stuck in the darkness
following the leader to our death,

got to move
on to tomorrow
into the light
away from sorrow
we can change but some of them cant see

living life following blindly that is not the way
its never worked for us before
our leaders are always doing what is wrong
we should live tomorrow
no need to fight today

is it all
completely worthless
are we all
stuck in the darkness
following the leader to our death,

got to move
on to tomorrow
into the light
away from sorrow
we can change but some of them cant see
#2
Not bad, my friend. Some good rhyming in there, and a definite theme. It's doesn't super-wow me, but it makes me feel good inside. Keep it up!
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