#1
Welcome to the 21st Century
The age of madmen
What a place not to be
Just want to die again

Welcome to the 21st Century
A society laced with resentment
A republic blanched of liberty
Boiling in discontent

Welcome to the 21st Century
Nothing is what it seems
Land of the oppressed, for no one is free
A world of hollow dreams
#3
Quote by metallinutter
Welcome to the 21st Century
The age of madmen
What a place not to beIn a rock/metal song, this lyric may be a bit too tricky to work into the song and still have the listener pick up the meaning correctly. In a ballad, ok, but if its faster metal it would take a few listens
Just want to die again Again? Did you die before?

Welcome to the 21st Century
A society laced with resentment
A republic blanched of liberty Your best line
Boiling in discontent

Welcome to the 21st Century
Nothing is what it seems
Land of the oppressed, for no one is free sounds ok, but you're basically saying the same thing twice
A world of hollow dreams


This has the makings of a decent song, I'd like to see it in a more finished product, and especially with a chorus.

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