Very nice song! You have a nice voice and your guitar sound is good too.. I enjoyed listening to this song, the only thing I can say is you should maybe turn the rhythm guitar down a little in the mix, if you do that you can maybe add some more instruments.. But overall I liked it, especially the vocals!

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Very nice. But the timing on the guitars feels a bit off at times.
Vocals are good, great at times, but sometimes they feel a bit dull.
Backing vocals on the other hand, I just love.
Great work, keep it up!

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