I might be doing this song for our school's talent night in december. We might also be doing Cowboys From Hell, so I guess thats where I got the Pantera influence from (by listening to too much Pantera). I'm also hoping to actually start a band with the other two, and I'm aiming for an instrumental post-rock/metal (Isis, Pelican, Russian Circles, Jesu, Scale The Summit, etc.) band, though my influences dont show so well in this song.
Very cool, man!!!
Keep making stuff like that!!!
Jason Becker

You're my lord!!!
Cool stuff, I liked pretty much all your riffs.

A couple things though.

I thought you kind of overused the triplets in that part from bars 17-32. With it happening every bar it kind of disrupts the flow and feels awkward. Maybe try it every 2 bars or even 4 bars.

When the bass is playing the lead, you might think about trying it an octave higher to make it really stand out more.

The song really could use a nice guitar solo somewhere in there.

Also, you never really return to any of your old riffs, so the song doesn't really feel like it's got a core or a central idea to it. It might be an idea to bring back old ideas and play them in new ways.

Anyway good job overall and that 6/4 riff really kicked ass too.