#1
Dark as night
black as coal
I don't want to fight,
just to play you, it's my goal

So when you're laying there
relaxed on my bed
I want you to know
if anyone touches you, they'll be dead

because you're mine
and mine alone
and no one will have you
for my love, I have shown

let me tell you now
straight and clear
there will be others I'll have
but none quite as dear

So when we're thrashing about
with you in my arms
in the spotlight on the stage
you'll never know the meaning of harm

so rest easy
my beautiful friend
tomorrow's another big day
and you're mine to the end


I was bored, it's about my guitar. :/
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Last edited by zappp : Today at 4:20 PM. Reason: Suck on my balls, UG
#2
it seems like you wrote this in two minutes, try making it more symbolic then TO THE POINT, by the way no girl is worth worrying about
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Standard Epiphone LP W/Dimarzio Super 2's
1973 Ampeg VT-22

Fulltone Clyde
Ernie Ball VP Jr
Boss tu-2
Boss sd-1
Ehx Little Big Muff
Fulltone Ultimate Octave
Boss eq-7
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Digitech Delay X-series
Ehx Holy Grail
#3
I wrote it in three minutes actually. Not really anything I plan on using, but I thought it was alright. It's not about a girl...
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