Kiwara
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Join date: Feb 2008
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#1
We play it with our mates, I wanna ask if its any good? perhaps if you have ideas on changes. It's a very straightforward song ...
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oneblackened
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Join date: Oct 2007
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#2
I like it.
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Bassmastajazzyj
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#3
man riff was eh but the rest was pretty good
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Kiwara
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Join date: Feb 2008
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#4
Well i like the main riff cause its something different thanx guys, I appreciate it
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Graveworm
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Join date: May 2008
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#5
The main riff was just straight up annoying. The song seems like a song that a person that is just starting to write songs would make. I think you should put more creativity into writing songs.
BKGMorley
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Join date: Nov 2007
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#6
well this is defenently more of a BM song but its still not quite there. its better than ur last one. the intro riff was wicked but the main irff is way too major. how is that doom song btw. pm me