Point out my various flaws or just give advice.

Super easy song - just to boost my confidence.
I know I shouldn't be looking at my playing hand, its a bad habit that I'll try to kick.
this is a post. there are many like it but this one is mine


Taylor Big Baby
Agile 3100 CSB
Peavey classic 30/112
Okko Dominator, Big muff pi, cs3, dd3, ch1, ts9, ad9, classic wah
Sounded fine to me, the only thing I noticed is what you already pointed out, looking at your fretting hand for the whole thing, which isn't ALWAYS bad, it's better than looking at a tab or something. I especially liked your tone, as compressed and crappy as youtube made it.
Telecaster - SG - Jaguar
Princeton Reverb, Extra Reverb
P-Bass - Mustang Bass
Apogee Duet 2 - Ableton Suite