#1
I love this song.
a request is, turn off anything else next to you as my mic sucks and is staticy and very quiet

i am really focusing on my vocals, please crit

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Guitarplaya27/

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#2
I thought it was ok, but it could be much better. The guitar was pretty good, but the vocals were all over the place. You really need to work on strengthening your voice, which will make it louder and give you a greater range. On many of the notes your voice didn't stay on pitch. Just practice, practice, practice, and you will get better over time, or take lessons if you want to.

I did a cover of this song too, care to check it out?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=931797
#3
I appreciate it man

and i will check yours out

i practice all the time and will keep doing it
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper