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So im quite new to the writing scene. I play guitar in my band, but I have no experience writing any lyrics. Ive tried to force songs out, but they tend to sound like a cookie cutter boy band tune......

Anywho, this is the first thing I've written that seems okay from my view, and id just like some feedback. This is specifically written for the female singer of my band to sing.
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Such a choice that I must make, your body sway's me the wrong way.
Should I call it love or call it rape? Seems that my dream's a tainted place.

What have I done? So much to take. So much to give......just call my name.

I'm not down yet, but I'm not going up. The words you speak, just promote my every touch. And some things I cant feel, are you more sensitive? I have to ask myself,should this mean love?

The task is done, and I feel great. So many nights I've stayed up late.
Now I've moved on, much more to take, seems like my dreams a tainted place.

What have you done? so much to give. There's more to take.....just call my name.

I'm not down yet, but I'm not going up. The words you speak, just promote my every touch. And some things I cant feel, are you more sensitive? I have to ask myself,should this mean love?

....I'm only human....I'm only human....I'm only human....
The artist is nothing without the gift, but the gift is nothing without work.