There's some great passion in this song; I can really tell that you're putting your heart into this music. The vocals are also really good; there are some pitch issues, mostly towards the beginning, but the voice fits the style of music perfectly. I don't usually listen to this style of music, but you pulled it off really well. My only criticism would be that the song doesn't really change much from the beginning to the end, and gets a little repetitive. But still, nice job.

Crit mine? The link is in my sig. Thanks.
Yeah it was really just something we did up as a sort of rough demo the other night but it was pretty fun and I was pretty stoked on the quality. Thanks for the input. Great stuff by the way!