#1
Not Perfect 2.0 in my profile
i left the old one there anyway

please i appreciate any critique i'm alway looking to improve

ill return the favor....
#2
back off the gain on the backing guitar.
other than that it's pretty good
Now officially has too much gear to list

PM me if you want to know about my recording setup
#3
This is really good for the style your going for. I'm guessing psychedelic progressive rock? It sounded sloppy in some areas but kinda like it belonged that way ya know?...


How will you return the favor?
Gear Wish list:

Gibson Custom Les Paul Left handed

ISP Decimator

Maxon OD808

Peavey 6505 Halfstack

Gear Fund: 0/6000
#4
You actually like the drum beat? Seriously?
But I thought your guitar work was great and I really liked it.
Do you have a song to go with it?
Last edited by tona_107 at Sep 16, 2008,
#5
Quote by cerveza
back off the gain on the backing guitar.
other than that it's pretty good


Thanks alot and will do

Quote by deanfreak93
This is really good for the style your going for. I'm guessing psychedelic progressive rock? It sounded sloppy in some areas but kinda like it belonged that way ya know?...


How will you return the favor?


hmm psychedelic rock huh?
not wat i was goin for but i see why youd say that

i dont know what you mean by it belonged sloppy...

and i mean ill crit anything you have but i dont see anything in your profile
#6
Quote by tona_107
You actually like the drum beat? Seriously?
But I thought your guitar work was actually great and I really liked it.
Do you have a song to go with it?


i used the drums on my rp150 i wasnt planning on making this but when i played the drum loop the backing came naturally... what would you suggest for a better drums?

and yea i have a main riff for it and im working on fills if you want i can send you a recording...but im not a lyricist and i have no band so all i can do is work on guitar parts
#7
Pretty cool. I think you're on to something there. The rhythm guitar could be a wee bit more up front imo. Keep it up!