#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JurvapFomBw

theres a lot to it so i would appreciate any crit, listen to the whole thing too please.... will comment and listen to any other music for comment just leave the link to your thread with your crit
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#2
thats pretty sick...nice playing. Sounds like you recorded live with a band or is it you doing all the instruments.
#3
actually that's all me.. it took like 3 days to get all the parts exact thanks
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#4
Hi,

Thanks for the crit on my song! Late reply but here is my crit:
Nice playing! I have nothing bad to say about your playing, it was great! Only your recording wasn't that fantastic.. How did you record it? Because the distorted guitar sounds really clipped.. It sounds like garbled noise when you play the fast riff..

Other than that, good work! Keep it up!

Cheers!
ZeG
#5
Quote by ZeGuitarist
Hi,

Thanks for the crit on my song! Late reply but here is my crit:
Nice playing! I have nothing bad to say about your playing, it was great! Only your recording wasn't that fantastic.. How did you record it? Because the distorted guitar sounds really clipped.. It sounds like garbled noise when you play the fast riff..

Other than that, good work! Keep it up!

Cheers!
ZeG


thanks, i've tried to get that tone right but i just can't find a tone that keeps the brutality AND the clarity....
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