lionslicer9999
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Join date: Aug 2007
593 IQ
#1
I made some random drum fills, then put gutiar over it, so the begining is just a filling for the drums =P

So you know, say bad things about it or good things.
Attachments:
gutiar stuff.zip
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Pingis_Or_Death
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#2
Pretty okay but the song sounded schizophrenic, like it wanted to sound major scale but at the same time dissonant, this sounded a bit weird imo (riff at bar 10 in particular). Other than that the riffs were allright, but I still think it sounds too happy to be metal :P.
Also the drums were annoying and lacked a specific beat, just lots of random snare hits, except at bar 23 and onwards, which was nice. I liked the part with hammer ons and pull-offs in particular.
Check out my metal song? (c4c)
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=957839
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lionslicer9999
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Join date: Aug 2007
593 IQ
#3
Quote by Pingis_Or_Death
Pretty okay but the song sounded schizophrenic, like it wanted to sound major scale but at the same time dissonant, this sounded a bit weird imo (riff at bar 10 in particular). Other than that the riffs were allright, but I still think it sounds too happy to be metal :P.
Also the drums were annoying and lacked a specific beat, just lots of random snare hits, except at bar 23 and onwards, which was nice. I liked the part with hammer ons and pull-offs in particular.
Check out my metal song? (c4c)
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=957839



I am going to take it you don't like Mastodon and don't listen to alot Pantera....
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Camisonfire
Join date: Jun 2006
122 IQ
#4
Mmm, overall this song was really cool for it's relative simplicity. I don't listen to this genre a lot but I do know Mastodon and this song sounds pretty good beside it.

I liked the song a lot more towards the middle and end when you added more lead. It was a really fun listen and I didn't mind the keylessness of it at all.

7/10

Review mine? It's not really this kind of music at all but you might like it, who knows.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=960056