#1
Hey, my friend came on vacation with me for a week and we recorded some acoustic songs so let me know what you think...I'll crit yours if you crit mine, thanks!!

We made a music video to go along with it:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BnTdV7Td91E

There it is, and the audio is in my profile too. Enjoy!!
#2
Really nice song, good to chill and unwind to
only crit i would say is give it a bit more differentiation at parts with more rythm or unexpected cchord change sequence etc
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Ah very good point. Charlie__flynn, you've out smarted me


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#3
Quote by charlie__flynn
Really nice song, good to chill and unwind to
only crit i would say is give it a bit more differentiation at parts with more rythm or unexpected cchord change sequence etc


Thanks! Yeah, it's a little repetitive, and it needs vocals definitely.
#4
i think it could use vocals too, and i noticed youre using a 12 string, i think you couldve made better use of it (melodies on the lower strings, ect.) but overall it sounds nice. crit 4 crit?
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