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red - wine glass religion
6 100%
blue - the feast
0 0%
Voters: 6.
#1
2 pts, 3 days.



---Wine Glass Religion---

Momma gathered us to the table
poured wine into our cups and called our attention.
We folded our hands as
she began to pray.

"Dear Lord:
Cleanse the earth of all that is unholy.
Remove the lips from unholy whores.
Rip the lungs from inner city filth;
those that haunt the bowels of the world,
that they might not curse you again.
Bring the niggers back to your loving bosom.
Show mercy on all those damned politicians who
rape the minds of the young and preach contrary to
your merciless love..."

"Mother, just stop."

Her eyes flared,
finally resting upon me
and burning into my cheeks.
I maintained eye contact,
took my wine in hand and
poured Jesus to the floor.



---The Feast---

Is it safe to go outside ? Since we’re completely exposed, and once we’ve sank into the wild,
do we have somewhere to hide ? Havens burnt by selfishness and overused arrogance;
when Armageddon’s brought by feelings, where’s the meaning to leave home ?

Between suicidal attempts and happiness, there is a mess we cannot fix:
A tired web of inconstancy on the depths of my mind, from which I can’t release.
The beast is weary, powerless, unleash-unable and it failed to existence.
Instead of turning to one another, why don’t we find the true meaning of intolerance ?
It’s all around us...
It’s out there...
And I can’t bear to take this anymore on me...
Release the beast !
Let it kill to have ourselves a small feast !

Between the drums and sick parades, there is a phase that goes beyond our celebration:
A banquet filled with salty meat, and strawberry juice to drink, or red wine.
It’s a free party with the lack of publicity; we’re strongly against elitism !

Between the main dish and dessert, we’ll discuss modern society and its in betweens:
A strong device, unreachable, unchangeable, but by no means we’ll stop.
The beast is done, with satiated craw; it’s satisfied but incomplete, as it’s taken to its cage.
Instead of just another day, the beast rebelled against its lords, as it unleashes its rage,
It’s all around us...
It’s out there...
It won’t stop until it feels appeased...
Cancel the feast !
Let the slaughter be concluded by the beast !

There’s none around us...
There’s just none...
A massacre occurred all among this tribe...
The beast’s out there...
Will the leftovers find a place to hide?
#4
Well matched pieces!

I have to say, though, I smiled when I saw yours, Mr. Zach. That's happened a few times recently; I've not bothered going back to read a piece but it turns up and makes me love it again. So although I think using old pieces is cheeky, I shall vote Red.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#5
If I remember right, you kicked my ass with "Wine Glass Religion" a month or two ago....Still kickin' ass to this day
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
#7
Don't feel bad, mate. I've used this piece 3 times in comps and its won everytime. You aren't in bad company.

This is one of few I'm genuinely proud of... so yeah.

If its any consolation, both of the ones you've posted in our 1v1s are my favorites from you. Both are very solid pieces.