#1
"you walk so heavy."
with humor girls mimic me.
saying i stroll like an ape,
strung out on bamboo sticks.

several alarms peel out.
furthering themselves from the
emergency frequency.
piercing ears of educated lads.

primate or panda bear?
i dug for fish in the Potomac
martha wasn't too happy
she said put them back.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Last edited by freshtunes at Sep 18, 2008,
#2
stanzas 1 and 3 are awesome, especially 3. nice work.
i thought 'stroll like an ape' was a little bit awkward but it seems to work regardless.