#1
Wrote this song this past Monday... still waiting to add another verse to it, the six lines towards the end are supposed to be a chorus I think... not sure yet, I might just make it into a verse, what do you guys suggest?

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It’s 5 am on this Monday morning
I’m getting drunk on a bunch of 40’s
This life, it just ain’t for me
Got a lot of ****ed up stories
Like getting drunk at age fourteen
Just because this life bored me
Coke, speed, hash—I’d take all at once
No concept of too much
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I’ve been pulled every direction
Influenced by other’s feelings,
Lost a lot of friends along the way

But always righted myself with
My own thoughts and feelings
Clear my mind to find the words to say
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#2
It’s 5 am on this Monday morning
I’m getting drunk on a bunch of 40’s
This life, it just ain’t for me
Got a lot of ****ed up stories
Like getting drunk at age fourteen
Just because this life bored me
Coke, speed, hash—I’d take all at once
No concept of too much



I really like that part... I dont know about the other (chorus?)
#3
Yeah.. I even feel like the "chorus" part is a bit off with the rest of the song, just doesn't feel right.. you know?