sounds pretty cool, you can definetly hear your influences come out in it. I did not know what to expect when I heard the start of it, but it develops nicely. I don't really how to crit it negatively so I'll just say I thought it was pretty damn good!
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Once the song gets going, it definitely sounds sort of laid-back and jazzy. It's got a great feel, very psychedelic and mellow. The auxiliary percussion (bongos or whatever) add a nice touch to the rhythm of the song. The guitar solo 3 mins in is a nice addition too, I like the effects on the guitar.

This is not the kind of stuff that I usually listen to but I liked this. It was just a very unique and chill song. Nice work.

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Sounds like underwater Frank Zappa, but then goes even deeper underwater to this really chilled vibe. Everything was perfect as far as I can tell . It's also some of the most original sounding music I've heard in ages.

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