Wow, it's been a while since I've been in here

Anyways, this song is in development, its mostly done, just needs a breakdown/solo/bridge of some sort. Tell me what you think thus far, how I could improve, all that shebang.

And of course, enjoy
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I'd like to see any of those meathead homophobes look a Spartan in the eye and call him a fag.