#1
My second song.

(verse 1)Creaks from the floorboards,
Under the bed,
Darkness and Shadows,
Will play with your head,
Open the window,
Look into the night!
Reflection and Moonglow;
Prepare for a fright!

(Chorus) Rain clouds are coming,
They glide through the skies,
Follow the wind now,
With deep orange eyes,
Wings beating slowly,
Blood rushing fast,
Flying in circles,
Beast of the Past...

(verse 2) Terror is calling,
All through the air,
Resurrect evil,
From beneath the stairs,
Halloween's coming,
There's no time to spare,
Monsters are coming,
Try not to stare,

(chorus)

(final verse) You are alone now,
No one is here,
People have fled from,
This terrible fear,
Nothing can save you,
No spirit can hear,
Scream all you want,
Death meets you here...



Please tell me what you think.
it's only about the second song i've properly written, and i didn't really have any inspiration.

Constructive Criticism most welcome.
Thank you.
Gear:
Squier SP10 combo Amp.
Squier Strat
(Bullet Black)

Needs better gear & a Job. :/
#5
Thanks guys.
Trying to think about any improvements i can make to it.
hehe
Gear:
Squier SP10 combo Amp.
Squier Strat
(Bullet Black)

Needs better gear & a Job. :/