#1
(NOTE: This is to replace the sloppy Lucretia cover I posted earlier and deleted)

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=dnNrBF3F0lA

This is a LOT better than that Lucretia cover, mainly because I spent more than a day looking at it. A couple of stray notes you can hear in the first couple of riffs, and the volume swells aren't perfect.

No solo though

C4C

Cheers
Last edited by xstax981 at Sep 20, 2008,
#2
The intro riff is a little off. You should practice it slower until you get the note lengths right and then bring it to full speed. The verse riff is also rushed. Work on your triplets.
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#3
Its not bad i can tell you that! Make sure you can do the song slowly before trying to do it fast.

crit mine its in my siggy

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#4
not so bad m8, but I hear a LOT of notes out of time, maybe you were nervous?, the pedalling on the E string was very tight, thumbs up for that

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=961242