#1
merchants said
i cant get my package
without proof of purchase.

all ten and the psalm shaking.
rack is on the counter,
a single marlboro in my ear.
lips are bitten dry...

but before you leave,
grab every last dollar outta the register,
use your ma'm and sir's
call a doctor, it's polite.
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i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#3
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im not sure what to think about this, ive read it like seven times, but i just havent really figured it out,
same here. i'm guessing the package is a free pack of smokes or a box of nicotine patches. cryptic enough to make you want to read it again and again. i think i figured out what "all ten" are, but the "psalm shaking" eludes me.

maybe it's not quite enough, or i'm just a bit dumb. idk

nice read anyway, Nick.
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#5
psalm wasn't a typo. thank you for the comments, have not gotten very many lately.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#7
I almost definitely didn't interpret this in the intended way, but in the way I did, it was good and I liked it.
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