#1
i want your honest opinion about the riff.....its ok if you say it blows what not.

thanks for taking the time
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#2
dude, that was pretty tight. simple, but still sounded awesome and spacey.

I suggest having that little lead part be 16th rather than triplets but that's just my opinion. keep workin with this!
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...