#2
Hey mate - typing as I listen

First off I'm sure I hear an Eric Johnson influence in that intro? Am I right? I really like the tone you've got on that guitar, sounds just like SRV by Eric Johnson. Just listening to the dirty solo, very nice phrasing. I like the melody line you've got after that solo, but it was a just a bit sudden for my taste, any way of clearing up that transition?

That octave shift solo is awesome, and the melody after it is beautiful! Did you write and/or record the backing track yourself? Props to you if you did. Very tasteful playing overall and a few nice runs thrown in at the end, just to show off. I like it! I really enjoyed this.

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#3
Quote by nagirrab
Hey mate - typing as I listen

First off I'm sure I hear an Eric Johnson influence in that intro? Am I right? I really like the tone you've got on that guitar, sounds just like SRV by Eric Johnson. Just listening to the dirty solo, very nice phrasing. I like the melody line you've got after that solo, but it was a just a bit sudden for my taste, any way of clearing up that transition?

That octave shift solo is awesome, and the melody after it is beautiful! Did you write and/or record the backing track yourself? Props to you if you did. Very tasteful playing overall and a few nice runs thrown in at the end, just to show off. I like it! I really enjoyed this.

Crit back? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=962428

Thank you very much Actually im not that influensed by Eric Johnsson, my main influence is Joe Satriani. Yeah I know its kind of sudden after the solo, maybe it helps if i put in some cymbals and a "joe satriani harmonic" Ive written and recorded eveything by myself