okay this is my first song, which I only have one verse of but will put up the rest as I think of it, I really do need help with it thought thanks!

There’s been trouble in this world
Metal towers rip the sky
Pollution fills the oceans
and the prophets make predictions
The end of the world is nigh
Last edited by Boorat at Sep 21, 2008,
I cant think of anything to really help you make this longer and Im with purpledinosaur on this unless ur talkin about Bill Nye or someother Nye I havent heard of it should be spelled nigh