#1
*verse riff* x2

Inside of your frozen compulsion, I sold you, I told you, give me your silence. Echoes fill the nest with broken egg shells, voices fill your eyes with golden tears. Feed me...feed me your satisfaction. I desire a response in return for your bliss and ignorance. My soul is so cold and perfect, so perfect for you on this bitter night. Told to, I told myself to feed on the kerosene. The match burned through my shame.

Freeze me to death for the vaccine, if only I could open my-

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly die

*verse riff* x1

It's three, in the morning. Rise up to taste my loneliness, I'm waiting for a life to touch. Shadows creep along the floor and disperse into the childrens room, ashes and roses sprinkled over my sick creation, not allowed to think. Free at last, words never spoken in the ocean of your thoughts. Speak to me little angel of this clear endless sky, I will spend all my time dreading this night, I will cry quietly until I die.

The truth will carry me into my own arms, I meant no harm-

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly die

*Guitar/Bass dueling solo*

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly die
#3
i split up the verses in spots i saw suitable so i can get a better idea of the rhythm and such.

Quote by ArcadianWarrior
*verse riff* x2

Inside of your frozen compulsion,
I sold you, I told you,
give me your silence.
Echoes fill the nest with broken egg shells,
voices fill your eyes with golden tears.
Feed me...feed me your satisfaction.
I desire a response in return for your bliss and ignorance.
My soul is so cold and perfect,
so perfect for you on this bitter night.
Told to, I told myself to feed on the kerosene.
The match burned through my shame.the imagery is incredible.

Freeze me to death for the vaccine, if only I could open my-

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly diethe chorus is golden. i dig it.

It's three in the morning.
Rise up to taste my loneliness,
I'm waiting for a life to touch.
Shadows creep along the floor
and disperse into the childrens room,
ashes and roses sprinkled over my sick creation,
not allowed to think.
Free at last, words never spoken in the ocean of your thoughts.
Speak to me little angel of this clear endless sky,
I will spend all my time dreading this night,
I will cry quietly until I die. no comment really on this one. it seems like you kinda ran out of thoughts about half way through though.

The truth will carry me into my own arms, I meant no harm-

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly die

*Guitar/Bass dueling solo*

Bring me, into your solar ice
Patiently, I will stand by your side
Blissfully, I will look up to you
Passionately, here I'll slowly dieand i still really dig the chorus.


yeah...overall its a pretty good piece. the chorus is strong. imagery is nuts. nice work son.

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