Now that our singer has finally recorded the vocals, I was wondering if you guys could crit two of my band's songs.

The first is called Explosions Intro. It's a separate song, but serves as a sort of intro for the next song. It's pretty mellow, and entirely with chords.

The second is called Explosions. It's longer and a bit heavier.

Note that these are relatively rough recordings especially on the vocals. Our singer didn't have much time so he only did one or two takes, so they're not the best.


I'm not a critic of any sort, but it wasn't too bad. I'm not good at feedback.
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