#1
To be sung sort of like "swing life away" by Rise Against.

Stuck on me why wont you go
I've tried everything you wont leave me alone
Try after try you are back again
Been trying to lose you since I don't know when

week after week and day after day
You, just won't go away
Everything I've been told everything I've been shown
Just won't work

Man in white
I asked to help me in this plight
Trying to rid me of this ghastly sight
But it just won't work
ooh no it just won't work

Ooh everything I've been told
Everything I've been shown
Stuck on me till I grow old
It Just won't work

Year after year month after month
Seek of a cure but it doesn't seem near
I ask you to aid me oh give me a hand
None of this has gone as I have planned

Sun in the sky another day passes by
your still here and I don't know why
Should have left me by now or so I've been told
But I think you're stuck on me till I grow old


If anyone can guess what this is about, 10 e-cookies to you
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Last edited by floppypick at Sep 22, 2008,
#2
That was pretty good. One thing I noticed was the line

"week after week and day after day
You, just won't go away"

You should put day before week, sort of like a progression, you know? Unless you're going for the rhyme, it's fine just how it is.

Other than that, it's pretty solid.


And I can't figure out what it's about, lol.
If you're gonna be dumb, you gotta be tough
#3
Quote by ToxicConfusion
That was pretty good. One thing I noticed was the line

"week after week and day after day
You, just won't go away"

You should put day before week, sort of like a progression, you know? Unless you're going for the rhyme, it's fine just how it is.

Other than that, it's pretty solid.


And I can't figure out what it's about, lol.


Yeah, it was for the rhyme, I spent some time thinking about that, haha.

It's about acne
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#4
I was thinking it was Pikachu from Pokemon Yellow Version, LMAO
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