#1
No matter what this may take..
No matter how much this will take
Even if it means death..
I wish to spend an eternity with you

If this means no then I can accept it
If this means yes then I will make you the happiest girl in the world
I can only love you in such a way
A man like me can love a woman

I know what you are thinking right now...
Maybe he is to good for me
But the truth is if it is love then
Then remarks will be forgiven

I'd Give my life
I'd give my soul
I'd give it all up just to be with you
Forever and ever 'til death do us part

All I ever think about is you
When I sleep I dream of you
This man you see in front of you
Is nothing you ever expected

*You never expect anything
But you still wait for it
Because at the bottom of your heart....
You can find feelings for the one that loves you

I'd Give my life
I'd give my soul
I'd give it all up just to be with you
Forever and ever 'til death do us part

Forever and ever...

*'Til......death......do......us......part

p.s all * are screaming verses tell me how you like
gear:
squier fat strat
fender 15 watt amp
yamaha f310
ibanez DS7(distortion)
#2
I'm not criticizing what you've written in any way, but isn't "I'd give it all up just to be with you" directly from a Black Light Burns song?
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#3
i'm not sure don listen to them at all, never even heard of them until like right now like in all honesty
gear:
squier fat strat
fender 15 watt amp
yamaha f310
ibanez DS7(distortion)