#1
Let me know what you guys think, the actual anatomy might structured wrong, so please do correct me if need be.. I don't typically write full songs

[verse one]
I keep falling further and further
Hoping soon I'll hit bottom
She knows she has a hold of me
Her love is like my remedy
It only lasts a short wile
And then it comes back to me
You don't give a shit, play me a fool
Why can't I stop falling for you?

[pre-chorus]
Why does it have to be... so bittersweet
You know you mean the world to me
My spectrum of emotions, all but steady
Happy then sad, such tragedy

It's cause...

[Chorus]
I'm too far.... in love (x3)
Yeah maybe, I'm too far

[verse twp]
I'm so far in there's no getting out
Like cocaine--I'm high then come down
Unlike drugs, this feeling never ends
Eats away inside until you give in
These games you win are so confusing
Can't you see it's me that you're losing
Well you don't care a bit, there's no hiding that
So i'll keep falling through this aftermath

[pre chorus]
Why does it have to be... so bittersweet
You know you mean the world to me
My spectrum of emotions, all but steady
Happy then sad, such tragedy

It's cause...

[chorus]
I'm too far.... in love (x3)
Yeah maybe, I'm too far

[bridge]

[chorus]
I'm too far.... in love (x3)
Yeah maybe, I'm too far
#2
well i know nothing about writing, but i liked it hehe. the subject matter is very similar to something i thought about writing about so personally i connect with the lyrics =).
#3
thats really cool curtis, thanks... I love it when I can relate to the lyrics in a song, more often then not I'm gonna like it! no matter the genre