cool, i'm gonna steal that (just kidding) but really, cool shit
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OK I shall crit this as I listen...

Nice work. I'd say it would be a good idea to vary that main riff a bit, its good but can become annoying because it doesnt change =P the chorus is awesome, as is the first bridge. Sound really heavy, and the solo is brilliant too, it fits in really nicely. The second bridge and solom, and the bridge after that are my favourite parts of the song, they sound awesome. I can't find much to criticise really, I wasn't too keen on the drumming though. Outro works really well. Overall, 8/10. Well done!

Crit my metalcore thing in my sig?
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker
Thanks for crit The drums are the part wich is the most difficult for me. I personally aint either too happy with the drums. So any help with the drums would be appreciated
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