#1
A very rough version, with some lyrics I posted in S&L a while ago. Note the cold, hence worse vocals than they should be.

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#3
surprisingly the begining reminded me of the plain white t's, but for crit errmmm it sounds like u were singing through ur nose, try and push the air throught your throat from your lungs to get a better sounds
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#4
Your singing isn't bad, but it does sound like you're trying to take the safest route as far as singing. Use your lungs more.

Then again, I don't know much about singing myself. I only learned that from the thread on UG for singing.
#5
Yeah, sing from your chest and diaphragm. Song's pretty cool, not really catchy because there's no immediate hook, but a cute, fun song nonetheless.
#6
Surprisingly, the bad singing is why I mentioned the cold. Because my nose was entirely blocked it didn't sound too great.

Cheers.
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#8
Thank you very much husband

I shall get to yours very soon
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#9
I don't mind the voice at all - I think the reserved vocals give it a charm a more breathy enunciation wouldn't allow. Great, creative internal rhymes, and while it lacks a really 'stand out' part, the chords and melody fit together seamlessly. A gem, in a melancholy sitting-in-your-basement on a rainy day way.

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#10
I like it. Your voice kinda sounds like girl that is in Juno.
#11
^ Buggered.
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#12
I found myself tappin my toes when it came on. I liked it overall, little short and the phrasing sounded weird at some points (i cant exactly remember where) I thought immediately of the moldy peaches when i heard this. Take that as you will.. lol neither a compliment or a criticism, just an observation.
Anyways catchy beat/tune. Overall not a bad listen keep it up!

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