#2
Not bad as a rough starting version, but quite a bit of it feels like build up, and never gets anywhere. A strong chorus or something would be great. And practice, of course

A look at mine would be very nice.
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#3
what one of yours would you like crit on link please ?
GEAR

customised westfield strat soon to be HH
MIJ 68'reissue strat from 1996

bunch of boss pedals
#4
Second one in my sig, the one that's a song
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