#1
Het this is my first one I uploaded here.

Tell me what you think of it.


Edit: Ahh men! I just heard it when the RSE's off and it sounds terrible like this!
Please listen it on gp5 xD
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(post)hardcore-riff.zip
Last edited by Mackz23 at Sep 24, 2008,
#2
Really, really good, except for the first measure...it seemed a bit out of place from the rest of the song. The rest is great, the drums are fast and heavy and the guitar is hardcore...very nice.
#3
Very good. Reminds me of "The autumn offering" and "In flames".

Now it just needs a wicked solo.
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#6
Thnks alot! And I dont know 'the autumn offering' so i'll check that! ^^
#7
Quote by grapedrink
Needs to be a bit gayer.


'Got something against post-hardcore?
Well don't come here just to say you don't like this guys work.

Don't listen to what that guy had said, it's pretty cool.
I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.
#8
that was really good i'll give it a more in depth crit once i see where you take the song if you choose to continue it(i hope you do)
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#9
It was really good, I liked it!
You should add some melodic solo, not too fast tho
#10
Excellent.
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