#1
Ok so this song is called I Love The Radio (being sarcastic). i wrote this song when i was heavily influenced by nirvana's "About a Girl"

ok so this song is really clustered

theirs 4 guitars

2 playing rhythm 1 playing lead and one subbing for a bass (which you can barely hear)

i played the drums but im not very good so i went off tempo a few times (well thats how it appears to me)

the vocals are recorded at wrong times two but my recording session was limited so this is what i got so far

hopefully next week ill have a clearer version

anyways check it out at

www.myspace.com/purecrap

constructive criticism only please and C4C

thnx!!
Last edited by urdad at Sep 24, 2008,
#2
For both the song AND your grammar/spelling...

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#3
Quote by Weybl Himself
For both the song AND your grammar/spelling...

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i'm sorry princess maybe next time i should waste my time spelling every word right just for you. you little bitch. save that face palm for your self cause your music sounds like shit
#4
Quote by urdad
i'm sorry princess maybe next time i should waste my time spelling every word right just for you. you little bitch. save that face palm for your self cause your music sounds like shit



At least mine's in tune and in time.
#5
Holy shit...that was awful. Not even the "rough demo" warning justifies that kind of mess. I understand not having high quality recording equipment, but the least you can do is play a few instruments in TIME with each other. Jeez....