#1
I can live without you,
I know your not the only one.
don't try to be friends,
it just gives me tattered ends!

It'd be better if I hate you,
and wished I never met you,
then I could get passed you
and wished I never loved you!

I don't need all your worries
I don't need all your trouble.
But I can't stop seeking
it's the only thing I crave!

Your life,
plus my heart,
could not work,
just tears apart!

You could,
not give,
me what,
I want

Now if you,
leave me,
maybe someone can save me!
#2
Hey man, this is pretty cool!
I like it, its well structured and ur rhymes are pretty good in sum parts as well!
put sum more up man!