OK here's another song I made about a week before the last one. Again all constructive comments welcome etc. I forgot to mention in the last thread that my influences for both these songs are mostly Muse & Feeder. Well thats what it sounds like the most anyway!

Thanks Again
Im not sure, The Intro just seemed to keep on going and got boring and repeatative. The bassline could be more intersting, Try using some scales.

Heres an Example. Its not that Good, But it should give you an Idea (I left the Solo to see what you could do with it, Some bits are off I know)