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Its All Right


I keep my love inside me,
I keep it in a room,
You do not have to save me,
My bed does not fit two,

Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right

To win money is a dream,
That simply will not do,
I’d spend it on cheap whiskey,
And luxury like food,

Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right


I keep a church in my draw,
It sometimes helps me pray,
You are my favourite aspirin,
You keep my mind away,

Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right
And Like That. He was Gone.

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Quote by Andzee
Its All Right


I keep my love inside me,
I keep it in a room,
You do not have to save me,
My bed does not fit two,
like the last line, the rest is pretty generic

Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right
seems like it could be really catchy

To win money is a dream,
That simply will not do,
I’d spend it on cheap whiskey,
And luxury like food,
first three lines are really good but the last one kinda ruined this whole verse for me, it just doesn't work


Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right


I keep a church in my draw,
It sometimes helps me pray,
You are my favourite aspirin,
You keep my mind away,
this is probably the best verse you've got, maybe its a bridge, but whatever it is this is my personal favorite part
Define
My….Devine
Mine
Its All Right


mega catchy chorus it seems like, verses were alright, maybe look into my advice but if not then hey you still got a solid song here

take a look at mine and give a crit? I haven't gotten any for some reason
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=965535