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One more day has a cool classic rock feel to it - I would ditch the chorus laden lead guitar in favor of a more pure raw sound, but that's me

I like the little melody played in between the verse chord structure - it's catchy but not annoying. I think there's a lot more room for a cool bass line in there as well - not over the catchy riff part, but throughout the song in general.

The breakdown has a Rush-ish feel to it that I like - I think going into half-time thing afterward would be better than the original riff thing. Think of going huge at the end.

That's all for me, thanks for critiquing mine!