#2
You stayed in time, I liked your tone, and you hardly made an noticeable mistakes, but you did miss a few notes every once in a while, and you didn't do any of the pinches. Nice stretching on the riff around 3:10, btw

Also, I don't know if it was YouTube's problem, my web browser, or what, but towards the middle of the song, the video was no longer matching your playing (no big deal, though).

Great job!

crit mine?
Quote by Duane_Allman
Your gayer than me, and thats pretty gay.
Quote by Twist of fate
If there's blood on the field, play ball.
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e|--3---0---0--|
B|--0---1---0--|
G|--0---2---1--|
D|--0---2---2--|
A|--2---0---2--|
E|--3---x---0--|
You just lost.[/CENTER]
#4
Quote by *kill'emall*
You stayed in time, I liked your tone, and you hardly made an noticeable mistakes, but you did miss a few notes every once in a while, and you didn't do any of the pinches. Nice stretching on the riff around 3:10, btw

Also, I don't know if it was YouTube's problem, my web browser, or what, but towards the middle of the song, the video was no longer matching your playing (no big deal, though).

Great job!

crit mine?


Yeah; my Pinch Harmonics definitely need some work.

*Critiqued yours.