the only one on my profile. one take, no rehearsal. i made it up as i went, and played all the instruments and sang. if you could call that singing. but check it out, and give me some recommendations besides practice more. that's an obvious one.
Yes practice more xD

The drums overpower it all and you cant hear everything else, plus the drums seem to sound like the odd bash about everywhere on the drum kit.
I only just heard the voice, sounded as if somebody was getting tortured. If you turned the volume of that up on what ever you put this together on, it might sound ok.
And everything else i just couldnt hear.

But its worth the attempt i suppose.
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