#2
I like the music, but I think the key is a little too high for your voice.

I might suggest maybe dropping the tuning half a step or a full step to fully compliment your voice.

Other than that a solid written song!
#6
Hi,

I like your voice! The key is indeed a little out of your voices range, but I'd like to hear it when you place the capo 1 fret lower or remove it.. I liked the song like it is anyway! The guitar sounds a little weak though, try turning it up in the mix a little..
Overall, nice work, very well done! I'd love to hear more..

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=955209
And I have a new cover thread going on here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=966595

Cheers!
ZeG